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2011 Poetry Theme Challenges#22 A Winter Night![]() |
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Hello Poets; I have stolen the title of this theme from my example poem by Robert Burns. As we are into the run up to the various winter celebrations which focus
on goodwill to all which Burns reflects so well in his poem as compassion and understanding for others and other creatures. So our theme isn’t winter
or night but poems of compassion.
Jemmy XXXX |
A Winter Night
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Divena CollinsA liner once sailed upon the ocean wide To America`s shores was bound Technology grew proud were the crew Whilst her passengers all slept sound. This ship was the largest to be built Designed of the very latest Proud were the crew technology grew They were assured it was the safest. The journey was far the ship sped forth A race hurriedly started Technology grew proud were the crew Upon that day they fatally parted. But the outcome was thus unforeseen Mountains of ice submerge Proud were the crew technology grew Until sunk by a huge ice- berg. Passengers lost to the frozen ocean A chosen few saved in boats Technology grew proud were the crew Whilst life jackets kept the dead afloat. Lessons may be learned by tragedy, When lives forever have gone Proud were the crew technology grew Whilst the heroic band still played on. ![]() back to list |
Ryter RoethicleIt was noon on a summers day I was sitting in the park Eyes half closed as I fed the birds Listening to a Meadow Lark. My peace, the scene was broken I heard the lady next to me remark "It's lonely here without him, I still miss him after all this time". "What right has she to disturb me, Interrupting my thoughts sublime?" But something held me back I smiled and let her use her dime. She didn't really see me as she spoke Her white head turned to me, Instead she looked right through me Seeing how things used to be, When life and love was younger And she was married happily. "I can still feel him you know" she said Even after all these years As she spoke I could see her eyes Begin to fill with tears It wasn't a stranger I held today I understood her words so clear. The pain won't ever go away Nor would I want it to Would I be better not remembering All that we went through? But without memories good or bad what are we to do? Should I forget how we first met How I fell in love with him? He looked so handsome in uniform So strong and tall and gay. Two boys and a girl shared our love But they've all moved away. If you forgot all the things that mattered what is the point to life? Why bother to make commitments Take a husband or a wife? Why struggle against adversity And why face up to strife?" And when she looked at me I knew Why I was sitting here today My life was good she said to me Standing, suddenly made her sway But I can't wait to meet him again And with that she walked away. I watched her struggling down the path As she disappeared from view. Suddenly I saw and stood resolved The old lady had given me the clue So many years of missing things I knew what I had to do. ----- Penang Beach Beside the gentle sea I sit Feeling an easing of my wit Normality returns a bit, I roar How long will it be before Chaos returns once more I wonder? I'll not be dragged under Casting stressors asunder, I see I am in control of me. The high tide laps as if answering I may not know all things I know when stress rings, ignore I have been there before I wont have any more today I'm ignoring you, go away! ![]() back to list |
Liz RuleReveal to me, my child, Your innermost secrets, For I have within my grasp The power of healing. On me wreak vengeance For crimes long past, Promises not kept And deeds not done, For I accept you, child, as you are, Human being that you be. I bear your burden as mine, For it is mine, And only long to set you free. back to list |
Peter WillowdownA low rumbling fills the air, growing louder and louder. Dawn is slowly breaking, the light growing progressively stronger. elsewhere in the city dogs are barking, birds are singing - but here the dogs and birds are silent as they too listen to the approaching vehicles threading their way across the stinking landscape, a long line of almost a dozen large trucks. The crowd of people silently watches the vehicles are immune to the stench of filth and decay that surrounds them howver. They have breathed it all their lives and although it offends them just as much as it would you or I, they do not waste time or energy upon it. There are hundreds of people gathering now, watching the approaching vehicles. In the distance the high-rise towers of the city are beginning to appear out of the growing light but nobody has eyes for them or the many airplanes that pass overhead in their descent towards the International Airport. All attention is fixed upon the nearing line of trucks. The crowd grows larger and larger until there are at least three hundred people gathered: people of all ages ranging from toddlers, growing children, men and women, old people, all of them dressed in rags even though they are for all that, washed and cleaned every day. Marie has four children. as soon as she wakes up she quickly them and all of them make their way to the low mounds around the shallow valley where the other hundreds of shanty dwellers are already gathering, as they do each morning. At last the trucks have reached their destination and stop. First one and then another slowly raises its full container into the air and dumps the tons of garbage from the city onto the sprawling expanse of rotting waste - as it did yesterday and the day before. Suddenly the silence is broken and the hundreds of people pour down the low hills, eager to claim the choicest scraps of recyclable material. And there is food too - half digested and half rotten pieces of meat, vegetables and things thrown out into skips from the backs of restaurents. An old man with one leg fends off a thin dog from a large bone to which some strips of meat still cling, the lips of both of them bared to reveal their teeth; a young child no older than two or three, finds a mouldering wing of chicken and crams it eagerly into her mouth, chewing quickly before someone else can steal it from her. Another child is sucking on a piece of carrot he has found. Occasionaly fights break out, usually between teenage boys, but generally most of the scavengers go about their business as peacefully as possible. They have no great energy to fight anyway but need it simply to get thru the day - as they did the day before and the day before that and will have to do for days, weeks, months and maybe years to come. Some of the people in the crowd have been living this way since THEY were childre. At last the trucks have all dumped their stinking loads and begin to make their way back to the motorway and the city. Marie gathers what scraps she has managed to salvage and takes them back to her hut to clean and cook for her family;s breakfast. Men and women, girls and boys are already busy, sorting rotting plastic and discarded clothes into piles according to type and value. In the city shops and offices are beginning to open, traffic is roaring, shares are being bought and sold, millions of dollars changing hands over darkened screens lit with figures to fast to follow. - but this is another world away from the world inhabited by the scavengers - it may as well be on another planet entirely. One man I met told me he sometimes got work four or five days a year, selling ice-cream at one of the festival holidays in the city but this year there was nothing. On the way back to the Ashram where I am staying a young man and his wife come out of their crude hut and smile at me, the young woman proudly holding out her week old baby girl for me to see, her face radiant with joy. I extend a finger towards the child and she holds on to it fiercly. "She is beautiful," I tell them, "and very strong!" They have no thought of asking me for anything - they only want to show off their baby. Only later does it occur to me I might have given them some rupees, not for themselves but as a gift for the baby. as such they might, without shame, have been able to accept it. I wish I had thought of it at the time. ----- The Last Rune When the last rune rises over the Earth the few remaining creatures and species of the poisoned land will fling themselves from cliffs like lemmings, mothers will give birth to blind abominations and on the Plain of Desolation Babel will briefly rise again to scratch against the belly of Heaven, leaking tainted ozone and pus over dancing celebrants from Breughal and Bosch chanting the ten thousand names of Satan, all of humanity united at last in one crazed and debauched nation beneth the Black Sun. But when the sun sets and not a single star is brave enough to rise above the horizon the mad maledictions of Man will cease, though not from peace but terror as out of the East loud hoofbeats resound like thunder, growing ever louder and nearer as Death and his companions wield their scythes, lopping off heads and collecting souls, fire flying from dark hooves of brass, bone and lead, brimstone curling rom cavernous nostrils, the atmosphere torn and ruptured by cries of dolor and pleading shrieks for mercy but Death has at least finished all pretence of compassion and is eager to fulfil his duty before he too is called to account, stripped of his foul cerements at last upon the very Mount where Christ once spoke and fed a multitude with bread and fish and Urizen granted Lucifer's wish whilst from a darkened temple in Gaza Milton cast his furious gaze above the burning fires and haze of Lebannon and Tyre and saw the rape of Eternity though when he came to write of it he threw down his pen in dismay and lapsed into an introspective solitude that even Blake could but partially interprete, walking the midnight embankment of Lambeth in a cloud of womean-headed fleas flanked by diseased Seraphim whilst supine on the dome of St. Paul's the Scarlet Woman wept and moaned and all the ancient Daughters of Albion tore their hair and beat their breasts like foolish virgins that had waited too long and on the eve of their long-awaited marriage had quite forgotten the words of their song and could but wretchedly sob and choke, the youthful wells of joy long dry and not a single droplet of moisture left in the skies or in their hearts and loins, nor yet a tear in their eyes, no, not even of expelled poison or blood; all streams, rivers, lakes, seas and oceans drained quite dry and only grotesque crystals of salt remaining as testament to the dying world's pain. When the final rune first begins to rise upon the final horizon both Erebus and the Fields of Elysium will discarge their opiate sleepers and amazed saints and sinners walk once more upon the Earth, albeit for a little while: Ghenghiz Khan, Hitler and Pol Pot will rub shoulders with Moses, Caetanya and Martin Luther but as the full constellation of the ultimate rune gains ascendence their fragile simulacra shall wither and fade, staggering and falling, black tongues shrivelling between astonished teeth, unseeing and deliquescent eyes staring from melting sockets, trembling skeletons dancing in an increasingly wild abandonment before they succumb a second time and surrender to chaos and disorder and fall to the ground as a harsh and angular frost, the fimbulwinter of all mortal vanity, the dust of all things gone and passed, even their names forgotten at last by forest and mountain, valley, plain and sky. Gone all flowers, gone all tales, gone all enchantments and endearments - the very breath of Life has failed as the Rune of Dissolution sucks all forms into its brightly glittering sigil, a scar upon the thinly stretched tissue of existence inflamed to a searing, nova intensity until eventually it consumes even itself in a light so unbearable no living eye may gaze upon it. The last entity to see it is in fact a tiny, pale fleshed worm that lived ten thousand aeons in a deep and lightless cavern of the earth, evolving quickly at a rate of many millenia per second as the layers of earth above it were stripped and burned away until it finally grows eyes and limbs and gazes momentarilly at the remains of all other species before it too is caught up in the world-embracing conflagration and is vaporised and joins the raging atoms of all other sundered constituents of multiform life, an end at last to years of yearning and stife towards an unknowable goal. If there is such a thing as an immortal soul it might feasibly survive the rising of the final Rune but to whom will it confide its victory - to Lucifer? to God? All Heavens and Hells have been evaporated, all gods finally exhausted of belief and believers, all angels and demons dismembered and eviscerated, all knowledge and wisdom boiled away, all goodness and compassion has had its day, vanished like the importunate screaming of the Invisible, all words finally bereft of what slender meaning thet might once have held, not a single song or poem left, nothing left to do or mourn. When the final rune rises over the edge of the world on the very last day will the Universe give a sigh of relief or celebration? Will Time and Space at last achieve a long-delayed apotheosis or suffer complete castration? Oh my friends and enemies and intimate strangers I have never known and never will know - perhaps we will not have too long to wait to find out... Last night I dreamed I saw the Yellow Star of Dissolution shining over my bed and I heard the eerie music emanating from its priest-haunted halls; it is, I know, merely the top-most sun of many in the dreadful Constellation of the Final Rune. Next the Emerald Star of Contradiction will rise beneath it and then the twin carbucles of Versace and Shimmerman and then slowly but resolutely, all nineteen terrible Suns of the Final Rune. It may take another million years before its full shape and awful significance is fully revealed but time speeds up towards the end and all light and other energies are sucked in and bend their trajectories towards it... Long ago Pandora released Hope from her Box but now it is finalled being recalled. Do not think there will be a final reprieve for Pandora or the least or most beautiful of butterflies. The Rune will be revealed at last and all living things must give up the ghost. None will gloat, none will gasp, when the Final Rune arises over the horizon it will be far too late for any of that... I knew what I had to do. ----- To you whom I shall never know To you whom I shall never know, in other lands, across wide seas of space and time, I gaze into the soul of things and see your pleasant faces and on the ether I seem to hear the subtlest traces of your thoughts, your joys and sorrows, your fears and hollows, your anxious sighs, your happy laughter. Peace and blessings upon you, my friends, may you love your children and may your children love you, may you watch with patience basking lizards behind your kitchen curtains, may you never contemplate disaster with a heavy heart or wander in vast gulfs without a friendly star to light yout way, garlanding with compassion those lost men and women wreathed in pale fire and riddled with a thousand bullet holes where they fell by the way... Love and respect your neighbours and each other, call all men and women your sisters and brothers, cultivating honesty and simplicity, hating only that which is hateful and, if you have a moment to spare, remember me, a million miles and a million years away, your child and your father, a figure of God's divine imagination gazing out across an infinity full of splendid constellations, a friend who you will never see though but a mere breath and heartbeat away. back to list |
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